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Jason Bentley, Santa Clara, California: writing, photography, graphic design, music, audio, video, technology, life

I saw it written and I saw it say...

I was browsing online today and found, nestled in some random web directory, a quicktime file of my favorite commercial in the world. It's a one minute TV spot for the Volkswagen Cabrio officially known as "Milky Way" but known to everyone that's seen it as "Pink Moon." I think this is arguably one of the best commercials ever made, for a car or anything else, and more than any other short film I've seen approximates the concision and rhythm and tone of a haiku or senryu.



While the ad may not be as universally known as, say, "I'd like to buy the world a coke" or the Budweiser "True" guys (aka "Wazuuuuuup?"), nearly everyone I've talked to that's seen this commercial remembers it. Here's why it gets the Jason Bentley award:
  1. Nick Drake. "Pink Moon" is a fragile, lovely song by the late English songwriter Nick Drake, and this commercial singlehandedly turned on countless thousands to his music. This is nothing but a good thing. Nick Drake was a singular, bruised talent that died much too young. He had the voice of an angel, and the guitar virtuosity of an acoustic Jeff Beck. The horn-rimmed scenesters on the L train can sneer at the Nick Drake come-latelys, the airplay on Morning Becomes Eclectic, and the apologetically ignorant profile on All Things Considered all they want. The first time I saw this ad, I recalled it was Volkswagen that also used Spiritualized's "Ladies and Gentlemen We Are Floating In Space" and I felt ecstatic that in a Clear Channel world, somebody at VW is shining a light and knows what they're doing.

  2. Color and tone. So few ads use a dark pallete and the cover of night to sell a product. Granted, it's ridiculously hard to do. Dark is...well, dark. Nighttime in ads usually consists of guys around a campfire or someone coming out of a rainy night to the comfort of Dristan. "Milky Way" turns the night pallete - all blues and blacks - into a glowing, beautiful world. And it beautifully sets up the ad's denoument: never has a reverse-brake light made such a declarative, winning statement of decision as the one on this Cabrio.

  3. Silent Storytelling. Most commercials are like sitcoms - exaggerated characters turned loose in a setpiece and given arch, hyperbolic dialog. In this sense, "Milky Way" is like a sumptuous HBO banquet: there's a a great deal going on between and within the characters, and all of it is beautifully communicated without a word.

  4. Repeatability. I could watch this commercial with the frequency of political attack ads and never tire. In fact, repeated viewings bring out some of the textures I've mentioned before.

  5. Craftsmanship. Just look at this thing. From the opening aereal shot to the final close-up of one of the female passangers, it's just gorgeous. The editing compliments the music without resorting to on-beat chopping or manic MTVness. The actors are all understated and expressive (and lovely to look at). The drunk reveler's "Woooooo" is on pitch with the music.

  6. Salesmanship. And the whole point of the exercise is, of course, to sell cars. And the commercial is so good, you don't realize that you see all the standard body-interior-turning radius shots you're used to in a car commercial.
This ad represents the first time an ad has affected me emotionally, unironically - where I didn't feel compelled to read between the lines or to consider the source. This time around, the source feels like someone close to who I am. The actions taken my the characters is pretty much exactly what I'd do in the situation, and what I've done a thousand times. I'm not, by nature, a very social person - I've always been somewhat apart from the party. My mom once told me about how, in kindergarten, the teacher would complain that while the boys and girls played duck-duck-goose or made fringed vests out of paper grocery bags, I'd inevitably drift off into a corner, sit cross-legged, and open a book - or just watch everyone else.

And I own a Volkswagen.

Laborisseria Uno

Mark: what are you in 25 words?

Me: "I offer an end-to-end print/online content and document development skill set that includes advanced technical writing, copywriting, graphic design, branding, document/content management, web development, public/press relations, presentation, strategy, and more. I am seeking a document/content development position that will leverage these skills." 42 words.

Mark: how would u de-marketing-ify that for a down-to-earth chicago guy? :-p

Me: I'm a damn good technical/copywriter, graphic designer, and print/online document manager lookin' for work. Go Bears.